托福写作应如何进行—挣钱多就算成功吗?

2015-11-10编辑: Sophie来自: 环球教育整理

   环球教育(原环球教育)小编今天希望和大家讨论一下关于钱多钱少的问题,钱多了你拥有的东西貌似也多了,那么你幸福了么?你感觉自己成功了吗?或者别人觉得你这样是成功的吗?这些问题和讨论的重点都可以是最近托福写作文章“Only people who earn a lot of money are successful?”中的素材,对于这一问题,你的观点是什么呢?以下是小编为大家带来关于此类题目的详解及范文,希望能够给大家提供帮助!

  Only people who earn a lot of money are successful?

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  托福IBT高分作文分析:

  不能同意。Only是绝对修饰词。

  确实,往往成功的一个表象是金钱的多少。

  钱不是衡量成功的唯一的标准。黑社会分子(members of criminal syndicate)、一些黑心的商人(evil-minded businessman)。

  有些职业收入远不如其他行业,比如,我国的教师,护士。

  成功的定义更应该基于社会贡献:甘地(Gandhi)就身无分文(without a cash in his pocket);特蕾莎修女(Mother Theresa )也是好例子。

  托福IBT高分作文范文:  China is host to over one billion people. While the majority of China's population is not rich; in fact, it is a very small percentage of people who hold the status of being wealthy. Does this mean that the vast majority of Chinese people are unsuccessful? The answer to this is irrefutably "no".

  There are many measures of success, and money is one of them. However, money is far from the main measure of success. To prove this point, one need only consider the possibility that a man could be wealthy beyond belief, but not consider himself successful. Perhaps he inherited his money, and has done nothing of value in his life. Perhaps he earned the money through ill means. Whatever the situation, it is more than possible that a rich man could be considered unsuccessful, either by himself, or by others.

  Many people believe that the main measure of success is happiness, rather than material goods. Without happiness, even a person with money, status and children would not be successful. However, a low paid schoolteacher might think he/she was very successful if he/she succeeded in getting children to learn their material well. Or perhaps a housewife, who makes no money of her own, would feel successful if she raised a healthy, well-adjusted child and kept her home looking wonderful.

  It is also important to look at the difference between self-perceived success and one's success in the eyes of another person. Perhaps the outside world views a man as unsuccessful if he does not have a lot of money, but he views himself as very successful because of his achievements in life. Whose opinion is more important? I believe that if one thinks he/she is successful, then he/she is, no matter what other people say.

  In conclusion, money is not the only measure of success. Anyone can be successful, whether they are rich or poor. What matters is how one views himself/herself; if one is proud of one's achievements in life, and feels that he/she has lived a fulfilling life, then he/she is successful.


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